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- F_18
Site for a copywriter friend of mine. Just finished it up. Have a go:
- fate_redux0
wow, very nice. I'm impressed with the presentation and animation. It'd be nice to have a rollover change for each list of works under each section. Beyond that, nothing to complain about.
- brandelec0
nice! pretty much straight to the point, i'm with fate on the rollover
- todelete__20
HOT!
ace work dude. really really friggin nice!
- puck0
Def need a preview for the web links, gets annoying to constantly have new windows poping up w/o giving me a choice to wether I want to go further or not.
- jevad0
wicked
a bit monochrome but I can understand why - still a smattering of colour in places would highlight and accent well
- F_180
wow, thanks all. i'm humbled. excellent points on the rollovers and the web section. i'll be revisiting them this week. any suggestions on color for the rollovers?
- brandelec0
try all o'them! green may be?
- Luckypp0
Really nice and tight, reminds me of www.firstborn.com.
Only comments is that I would like some of the tranisitions to be a bit faster.
Great layout though.
- jevad0
orange
- puck0
Be careful with that coloour. Any single addition of color will demand all attention due to the monocrom. nature of the site. may be what you want though
- tny0
you could make threm maroon, like the floating nav bit
- jevad0
yeah
- versa0
#a61111 maybe
nice straight forward site
- Spix0
very nice.
- tny0
nice work btw
- F_180
thanks for the input everyone. i'll bump this thread when i make the changes.
- jarredbishop0
what font is that? its lovely
- F_180
the main typeface is DIN - reg and bold. the type that fades in small between the larger lines is futura i think. i forget and i'm at work right now.
- F_180
thanks for all the input. much appreciated