Logo Crit
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- nosaj
I'm designing a logo for a hotel restaurant. They're going to be offering "home made, comfort food" as opposed to "vacant meals". I would love some feedback on the 1st few concepts:
http://www.inseptember.com/favor…Thank you.
- brandelec0
really like #1, not sure about the rough border
really like #3 too but not the colors
great job mon
- tim5250
i like #3, but not the color scheme. try something more inviting. for instance the color scheme on #1 works well.
- mayo0
I agree. #1 is my favorite. The other two look very airporty. However I'd personally like to see some other colors on there. While it satisfies a feeling of nostalgia, it also doesn't make me think the food is fresh. does that make sense?
- jarredbishop0
#1 but without the border.
- jevad0
those are all fucking lovely!!
- rasko40
these would have been fine several years ago, I look at them and get the feeling I have seen these logos in cheap roadside chain service stations. They look dated and rather downmarket, which could be fine for their target I dont know.
- tny0
nice work. people seem to love the brushstroked look so i'd say 1. personally, i like 2, but it may be too hard edged
- brandelec0
'restaurant' type looks good on #1.. the 'O' in favorites is buggin me though..
i dunno, vee canadiens spell it favourites.. so queer eh?
- Buckyball20
agreed. numero uno. with the border. when it reduces in size. bye bye border anyways. nice work.
- turntowhitenois0
great job, tough call. i say go with what relates to them (owners/workers/food personally). number 1 also uses more traditional food-oriented color.
just one beef—on number 1, switch up those brushes, I see 3 of the same boxes in 2 colors!
- kld0
number one but resolve the border, maybe a little thicker.
- nosaj0
Thanks for feedback. I figure I'd wait until I have them tightened up until I start trying different colour schemes.
- rasko40
and your kerning on number one is terrible.
- cloned0
#1 without the border hands down
nice work
- nosaj0
I've added another design to the mix. Any thoughts?
http://www.inseptember.com/favor…I'm going to make a number of the revisions mentioned in previous posts and present tomorrow. Thanks for your time.
- kld0
still like 2 but fix the letterspacing. The graphic elements are good though.
- nosaj0
Thanks KLD - I'm gonna work on the type for that on in the morning.
- uncle_helv0
Interesting to see how number one would work in black & white, say in a newspaper!
- nosaj0
uncle_helv. I dropped an all Black and a B&W version of the 1st one onto the bottom of the list. I think I need to work in some dot shading.
- vburo0
these look al very american like. which is great if this restaurant is over there!
if so, then it is a good logo.