mockups crit
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- Timson
Doing this site for a company into construction/real estate.
Main problem is they can't provide any 'real' pics and most of the floorplans look like crap.
Tell me what you like, dislike etc.
Tnx
- ivan_cook0
i like the first one better, but i'm not really into that bkg. image.
- Rushmore0
1st one has a much better look and feel to me.
- MrDinky0
i like both
both serves its purpose
and decent design
- irrelevant0
I can't read the text.. I cannot comment
- k0na_an0k0
i'm diggin the first one most def.
- Timson0
Though one. I'm not planning to show these completely different versions to the client as they'll start to mixmash both into eachother.
I prefer the first one too but someone directed me into that second design.
- irrelevant0
you could use both.. the first a place holder/enter page (change the color to match the 2nd layout)
just an idea if you are torn
- lifeinbinary0
i vote for the first one. i like it.
- Neuarmy0
1
- Timson0
Ok, serously leaning towards 1 now.
Do you think i should ditch the bckgrnd?
- stewart0
mock2 is better organized.
another thing, i read "Voorstelling" as a theatre show, you see? or is that typically belgian to say it like that.
- Timson0
It's what they provided for 'introduction', stewart.
- -alby-0
I kinda like it with the background. Maybe you could use another image? One not already included within the site. Just a thought.
Either way, looks good.
- stewart0
so you belgians read that as "introduction"
AMAZING!
- raelou0
2 is strong.
i think a combination of the two mocks would be interesting.
- Timson0
Do you think 'introductie' suits better? What do you dutchies call it?
- Clear0
Like the first one better, but think the bg image needs to be changed. For some reason I just don't care for it.
Also I kind of like the blue in the 2nd. Anyway to add just a little of that blue into the first one. Maybe replace some of the grey. just an idea...
- Timson0
Maybe I'll do a mixmash of both before the client asks me too ;-)
Still prefer 1 tho.
- stewart0
yeah, intro or introductie.
or profiel or bedrijfsprofielbut voorstelling is a bit strange imo. i can only read that as a "toneelvoorstelling", not as "even voorstellen". you know what i mean.