BUMP - Site Crit. + looking for job
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- eik
Hey Everyone! Last post did not satisfy me with the number of replies it got, so i pos it one more time.
I need a site crit on my newest work for CRO Biomapas. Please describe the overal feeling of the site. The link is http://www.biomapas.lt
And i am also looking for a job for a month or two as a freelancer, i have skills and i know my work. if you would like to hire me for a project, please do write me at paulius [at] eik.lt. Take this seriously, as i am in a desperate need for $.
Thank You!
- james-0
its nice, clean
does the bottom just cut out like that? (im on pc, ie), like i can still scroll down but its just white
i would line up the top two liner (Contract.... BIOMAPAS) with the content in the bottom
- james-0
oh and the navigation was a little confusing at first, i thought it was a conventional expandable menu, with sub section, didn't realize the more 'button-looking' buttons are the sub options... might wanna think about that
- eik0
Thank you james-, and no - there should be no cut outs - please check if you have javascript enabled, because it is required to navigate the site. Problems like that only appear when viewing the site on Linux.
Feedback about buttons is very usefull - thanks again.
- jevad0
"please check if you have javascript enabled, because it is required to navigate the site."
BAHahahah
Fuck's sake - who doesn;t surf without jscript enabled...that'll be it for sure!
- james-0
lol - i'm locked and loaded ova here, i'm still not sure how the site is supposed to look... its all white background right now?
- bolus0
i don't know much about webdesign but i like the overal feeling
one thing i didn't like: the 'moving' yellow sticker thingy
but still very nice
- eik0
OMG - i got jevad's attention! :) Bro - in a large companies they don't even let you piss without permission, not talking about enabling javascript.
It happens.
- eik0
James - no the background supposed to be brown. With a centered white flash thingy. Get firefox or XP SP2.
And... Thanks :)
- jevad0
eh?
- eik0
Jevad - tell me what do you think about the site?
- eik0
Anyone else?
- ants0
Hey Eik,
I just had one thing about the site that I felt was a little uncomfortable. The copy seems to begin a lot lower down the page than my eye expects. ad to that, that the "post it note" doesn't really feel like a heading to my eye either. If anything it feels like it belongs to the image above it.
From a purely visual point of view I really liked the use of the grid and the large image above the copy. :)
hope that's helpful.
- eik0
Thanks ants. I will consider minor changes after i get this site critisized.
More? :)
Oh... and don't forget i'm looking for a job :)
- brozilla0
just out of curiosity, why did you do the entire site in flash?
Seems like everything except the animated headers and page titles could be done in HTML/DHTML. Not that there is anything wrong with that. Just curious.
Ya, the double side nav is confusing. It would definately be much less confusing if the main nav was seperated from the sub nav...most eyes have been trained with the main nav up top, and sub nav down the left (or right) column.
At least, make the sub nav links/buttons relative in postion to the main nav category ex:
-About Us
history
structure
personnel
advantages- Services...
Also, I agree, the page headers seem odd and a bit out of place.
Everything from the color (yellow) to the flow of the line - diaganol.I think the pge peels are effective.
Overall, the site is very clean and well designed. Good job,
- eik0
Thanks brozilla - thats a nice feedback. Very good idea on making the sub nav more visible, thanks.
About the flash... Well, sometimes i just the way HTML loads, especialy the transitions between the pages, and the different feel on different browsers and platforms.
That is mainly the reason i used flash, the other reason is that client wanted to have an animated flash header.
And I am obsessed with F.I's (Fantasy Interactive) idea of the new generation Internet 2.0 =)