Critique pa-leeeease
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- abizzyman
hola...
http://www.arcademedia.net/kai/
australian pop-star hopeful... living in Arizona at the moment...
bah.. yer thoughts?
- stewart0
sta-raaaange logo
- josimarX0
nice, the scroller bar handle looks a bit underworked though. maybe the logo should be on top of the fancy black shit behind it?
I like it though, as long as the Flash is really slick, it'll be cool.
- UndoUndo0
i like the style and i think it will be big this year! i agree the srollbar handle stands out the most and could be improved. but overall v nice
- ********0
Lookin' good yabizzyman.
Agree with the scrollbar.
An' josimar's richt aboot the flash huvin' tae be as smooth as the unnerside o' fer tongue.
- Terminal270
Yeah, What they all said about the scroll bar. Also I would consider left justifying the links so that they look a little neater.
Know what I mean?V nice
- -kappa-0
I likey...
Yeah can see it animated in flash like the "Oranges and Graphic design" site...can't remmber the name of those cats.
Also, theres a visible line in your texture th the right of the Diary & Message Board
- tomkat0
good, likey
but the whole black transparent thing in front seems a bit sluggish compared to the rest.. type+scroller are too big
- rabattski0
i find the top a wee lill too heavy.
- those0
what kinda music is it..?
- _smk0
should be sweet, looks nice - I'd ike to see how it looked with teh nav elements at the bottom though (not a big gripe or anything)...
- jpolk0
perhaps make the red pop more... maybe go a little more orange.
not feelin' the nav, looks uncomfortable.
nice start though.
- warheros0
site looks all right, but i wanted to let you know that i have a friend named kai brown and he doesnt look like that. he is more of a black person than that pussy is. haha, jk you know.
- non0
Dalliance flourishes all the way!
- instantok0
the darker rectangle seems a bit off to me...i think it might look more natural without it...seems to want to pop off the background more than it does now...maybe a dropdown for the music player if there are multiple tracks...i dig it though
- abizzyman0
hey thanks...
... i'm bumping this for teh day-crowd...
... danke.
- k0na_an0k0
I like it. Nice color scheme. I agree the scroll bar needs work, too 'in your face' ya know. Also, what if the news boxs' background was a dark brown, instead of black? Looks a bit off too.
Other than that I really like it. Nice work.
- abizzyman0
sheeeet... the darker rectangle thing is a mistake - it's only visible on macs - ca-razy...
.. I just killed i think though... there isn't supposed to be a weird rectangle around the whole thing (unmatched background of comp and browser background)...
:)
thanks!! feed is perfect... I'm on it.