Site comp crit
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- jevad
http://www.jevad.com/kate_hughes…
Have at it - click images to progress....
- ********0
get tae bed ya late night hoooor.
*jist jesting ye
Ah like it! No too sure o' the Bratney-esque school lassie like but itherwise as tight as a duck's erse (that's watertight!)
- stewart0
pictures are way too small.
- jevad0
wicked mx - chars.
How about this then?
- jevad0
stewart you'll be able to click on them to expand them
- ********0
GET MA FAMILY OAF YER SITE YA DURRRRTY FUCKEN HOOOOOOOR!
- jevad0
hahaah
actully...I'm not sure if I don't like this look better
- ********0
Aye... how about
"Fish an' Chips an' stinkin' Glaswegians while u get yer patch trimmed"
- jevad0
bump
- k0na_an0k0
that site is sexy! clean and sexy!
- jevad0
cheers boss.
d'ya think it looks better centered with the coloured background or sort up up in the corner on a white bg?
- story0
I wanna see some pink
.... color that is.
- kbags0
I agree, PINK!
Overall design is tight...
bio text is tough to read
gallery looks nice
"Hair & Make-up" needs more attention...it's her line of work and the focus of her site. I also think it looks kinda funky left-justified with Kate Hughes...maybe nudge it right and inject some color?
- jevad0
hmm...yeah good point kbags - thanks
- instantok0
definitely centered on the colored bg...the only thing i'm not sure i like is the 45 degree lines in the white bg...what would you think about the photos being the entire width & height of that space and moving the subnav underneath the main nav and horizontally oriented?...i think that might make a stronger impact and ground the logo a bit more...the bottom right of the "G" in the logo looks like it's degrading a bit at that size...
very nice though...really lets the photos speak
- johndiggity0
yeah, ditto me on the 45º lines. maybe some makeup-like powder if you want more visual interst or that subtle splatter multicolored gradient thing all the kids are doing these days? it needs to have a softness to it that it lacks now. good structure and nav though.
- jevad0
cheers lads - come nice ideas there - much appreciated
- warheros0
id make her name fill in the entire space up above the pictures and align the left edge with the pics. but that's me. looks kind of awkward. do something with those diagonals. make them functional.
the navigation seems kind of up in the air and detached. maybe bring it down to the pictures a tad? im thinking a font with a bigger stroke for her name too now that i look harder.
lookin good though, youre going in the right direxion kiddo!
har har
- james-0
i likey likey
- ********0
damn i LOVE 'em...
the chix i mean
and the layout too... solid... like the typeface for the name alot
- tkmeister0
i like it, nice and clean, no fuss.
i'd love to see the photos bigger... i think it makes a huge difference when you do that, especially if your clients have great photos.