Crit My Portfolio
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- arseni
Hello,
Please crit my portfolio:
http://www.arseni.comI just launched it, so more works will be added soon.
Hope you enjoy!
- hoggy0
yea man, i dig it...really clean. easy enough for anyone to navigate and sweet enough for designers to appreciate...good sh*t.
- clone0
looking good arseni
you may want to put a new 3d animated a in there the reflection is kind of grainy on the large version
the colors work and the suttle shading is effective
- Gorbie0
very nice and easy to nav.
was able to look through all your work in moments.
- fugged0
you might want to use scripted tweens rather than timeline based animation for some of those transitions. You'll end up with a much nicer looking motion.
- save0
why do the page numbers go backwards?
not a fan of sites with music
- arseni0
Thanx guys!
Fugged,
i'll see what i can do about it.Save,
mmm, i know page numbers look weird , but there was a reason which is pretty stupid and takes long to explain =) i'll change it over time...
sorry to bother you with the music
- clone0
some people like music some dont offer volume control in addition to your pause play
check the muxic player in the lower right it plays mp3s through xml
- ********0
very good, i am not a fan of your choice of fonts however, seems outdated to me. everything else is great, really good work on there too. :)
- warheros0
nice work! i like the free estimage thing.
- arseni0
Clone,
Yeah, i'll definitely add a volume control. I also use an XML player , but i think that the one i use is better than the one you showed me because it streams music... so it doesnt have to be loaded completely before it starts playing.
I just need to add a volume control...
- 2cent0
i'm no motion expert but that intro looks a bit choppy and pixelated.
- clone0
arseni-
i'll trade ya source files.
i have yet to get my streaming to work
- clone0
arseni check your mail
- blackspade0
after the pointless splash page
i get a black grey page
Firefox, osx
- blackspade0
doh! *blank* grey page that is
- Gorbie0
i was gonna say... the black-grey page is NT, silly.
- fatkid0
your shits whack, son - find another profession
:P
- Beech0
I like it. Noticed a typo Or i thought i noticed a typo. On my comp OSX 10.3.8 firefox in the news section the "d" has been dropped off in the browser but when i copy and paste it is there.
Maybe the last letter in the text box is masked or something?
Anyways I like the site, it seems very ... friendly. Don't know how.
good stuff.
- arseni0
blackspade, you mean you can't see the website? if you can see the pointless intro, you should see the portfolio as well, since it's all in one .swf file.
fatkid, thanx man...
- arseni0
Clone,
i'll send it to you soon
Thanx!