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- warheros
please crit me.
http://www.paulhanger.net/logo/
it's for a made up product for school, "fritz stikz," a fruit snack in the shape of a stick with the same nutrition as a piece of fruit.
i tried to make it look "natural" and like a leaf. the logo is a stylized f & s. presented are different color combinations.
- josimarX0
hmmm, you're asking a bit much of the audience I reckon. The leafy bit and colours are quite nice though.
Any brand with z's in it is poxy anyway.
- blaw0
regarding the color scheme, green on red, or red on green don't work.
but where you have the green and red separated by the yellow, it looks just fine.
- rasko40
initially I thought it was quite nice, but on a second thought, the mark is barely recogisable as the letters, and doesn't really have enough impact to become an instantly recognisable household logo like say the coke wave or the quaker sheaf or whatever your hypothetical 'competition' may be.
- warheros0
yeah, i know green & red clash, i had to do the color combinations for class though.
- warheros0
so, rasko, it's not "fluid" enough?
- vburo0
the leaf looks like a cunt to me. and the colors are too saturated..
- rasko40
its not that, I quite like the mark but to me it seems a little too fussy to become an indelible mark, I think it needs to be somehow simplified and made more iconic.
- warheros0
hmmm, okay. get what youre saying. guess ill spend some time with the sketchbook tonight.
- dippy0
yes, more iconic. rasko is right. The colors are very bold, but the logo itself is not.
- armed_rob0
I think it needs a bit more work...
Drop the outlines – one color on black or red would be my suggestion. All the outlines makes til logotype more complicated!
The leaf looks like an ass – move the line up...!
- Nairn0
it reminds me of a camel toe.
can't say i like it very much - seems needlessly embellished, and there's too many colours.
sorry.
- sandpipe0
looks somehow ... you know ...
- vburo0
yeah, camel toe is a better description, sorry.
hey, but sex sells, so..
- Luckypp0
Looks good to me, I like the flow of the lines, but the colors seem gimmicky. Like they are trying to be too hip and current.
- warheros0
okay, well i had to pick three colors to boot. and i tried to pick "healthy" and "natural" looking colors. give me suggestions if you can. i know the colors are kind of weird.
- buddylee0
yep, looks like a vag...
- Luckypp0
For some reason, I would love to see a brown, tan and muted blue or green.
- k0na_an0k0
nice. up right rocks.
smooth logo!
- JamesEngage0
Like Mercedes Benz