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- canuck
http://www.bypeterandpauls.com/b…
only portfolio section with some content is web development.
it's still kinda rough right now.
thoughts.
- xau0
Nice implementation of the book metaphor. It eliminates the clumsiness that other 'book' websites inherit. Yours is clever and appealing.
- dippy0
nice. I like the interface. It's very subtle and soothing.
Make sure you get a copy editor to go over your text. It's spelled one's, not ones.
- MrDinky0
dude there is no preloader..
dont know if its loading or not
- canuck0
no preloader?? are you sure. There should be.
- instantok0
the book metaphor is very tangible and tactile but the subnav and typography are very webby...maybe try to mesh the two a bit more?...looks good though...the fades on the thumbnails run kinda slow
- spiralstarez0
looks good... Crank up that framerate to the magic number 31.
chops on mine a little, could be smoother.
- canuck0
yeah. I always forget to turn up the frame rate.
I do need to do something with the fonts, you're right there.
- derek20050
it scrolls on 1027x768.. it shouldnt
- derek20050
contact page has blurry pixel fonts
- anzelina0
grammar! i know it's rough, but........ spelling!
- derek20050
drop shadow looks clipped on the right... the gradient in the middle of the book extends over the thumbnails section...
im not personally loving the page flip.. its "smokey"
i also spot 4 fonts....
- derek20050
also add this to your HTML code...
so people cant fuck with your shit
- derek20050
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- canuck0
haha derek is on a rampage. yeah I think there may even be five fonts ; ) Still playing with them.
Also I havnt checked any of the text.
Yeah the drop shadow is bugging me now as well. I need to fix it.
- dippy0
I'll help you out with the copy. :)
ABOUT: Page 1
Everyone's (should have apostrophe)
One's (ditto)ABOUT: Page 2
First column: everyone's (apostrophe)
In the second sentence of second column, take out the apostrophe in it's.
- derek20050
brrat!! lol im just trying to make it the best it can be...
:)
go leafs go!
- snuggles0
Captian canuck, it needs some photos of teh strippers!!
Seriously though, can't say I'm a big fan, needs a lot of tightening up in general. Even a stronger, more visable grid would help the portfolio section. At first glance I didn't even realize it was a book.
- derek20050
alex, where you from in toronto?
- canuck0
derek, I'm living round jane and finch right now.
- Spix0
i like it..nice use of the book.