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- longman
Could i get your feed back on these please.
They are for a design company.
http://www.pixelchef.co.uk/defin…
cheers people : )
- tomkat0
I'd prefer 1a or b, with some corrections on the letterspacing..
rather b.
- _salisae_0
top one says your concept better.
you can get rid of the extraneous line though. just cut through the d with white - the line is already there.
- longman0
thank for the feedback guys.
anymore!
- mattyd0
i like 1a as well. and agreed on getting rid of the line and the spacing.
- Kiko0
I would go for 1b, certainly more legible, and less in your faceI would however shift the dot on the I up to the level of the f if you catch my drift
and sort out the kerning .
- _salisae_0
the placement of the white line is a little awkward. play with where that sits.
- longman0
yeh cheers guys have done lots and lots of ideas if the first idea get chosen the spacing will be perfected.
Thanks again for the feedback!
- ahaynes010
I like the second one..(th thinner stroke) It says clean cut a bi tbetter. also, maybe try a few more color combinations.
- Soler0
I agree ahaynes... 1 just looks blah to me. 2 is pretty sweet just needs a little massaging
- imakedesign0
1b with corrected kerning.
- ********0
it'll make more sense with a capital d
- seangetti0
I like number 2...
- tuig0
hmm...you should do something about the spacing.
also find a colour that is opposite to the brown,something that will make it notiicable...becasue now its a bit faceless.maybe also some variations in the type.looks like you just took helvetica..try to do something with that it looks more flowing and wil distuingish itself a bit more.
mayebe the baseline is 1a should also be a another type ...
- lind0
1b looks the best but I would try a different san serif font -- the round part of "d" tapers a bit towards the top -- I would find a font where the stroke has the same width. Also try a more creative accent than TM.
- greg0
I'd try something other than helvetica
- johndiggity0
what happened to distinct? these look eeirly similar, sorry they still are not working.
- jdcomba0
1a is the best one
- longman0
Thanks for the feedback guys has helped loads, will give them a good going over : )
thanks again.