www.jenniklein.com
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- dippy0
wait a minute... I don't know why I gave you a crit. You didn't ask for a crit, didja?
;)
- janne0
oh no, the pvn would stink!
well at least when MX_OnD is around.. fartin!
- jennik130
yes, crits please....
- blaw0
i like your work, but the site is only okay.
i can't quite put my finger on it, but the main layout seems off. you have three distinct areas that just don't seem to mesh together.
- ********0
I stayed for a while, loved the pics but I wanted some larger images. I did end up at Freshmarket watching the food fade in and out.
- ********0
drop shadows? yes
- vwsung18t0
congratulations, you're going to hollywood
- enjine0
ssssup with the sepia tints?
- lara0
looks complicated. too many design elements i dont understand. why using fading type...whats the picture on the left.
Just simplify. only show your best, most thoughtout projects. Eliminate the rest.
good luck..we live only a few blocks apart...
- enjine0
lara, you're another NT nyc citizen and yr not even coming to library tonight?
- enjine0
you too, jennik13
(re: my last post)
- piperboytoy0
are you loading everything in the first flash file? is this your first portfolio?
- piperboytoy0
I didn't even see the nav at the bottom right. are you trying to hide stuff?
- ricstultz0
l0ad time took too long... so I closed it.
- ricstultz0
ok... I likey once it loaded. I'm busy at werk tho so maybe a more in depth crit in a bit....
- terlizzi0
How was working for the nhl ??
- piperboytoy0
the site looks a bit generic. There isn't much personal style that shows your creativity.
the site takes so long to load too, You should seperate your flash movies so we won't have to wait.
- lara0
enjine,
i was thinking of stopping by, but well i've already made plans tonight. where is the library bar anyway? (am i ignorant?)
- jennik130
thank you all for the critique. this is my first online portfolio and flash site so ive got a lot to learn.
to answer some questions:
- it takes a long time to load bc i built my site wrong and have 1 flash file instead of many. ill fix this when i have some free time.
- working for the nhl was kick ass. unfortunately, the laid me off after 5 months
- i made the bottom rigth navigation light so users can "explore" the site. ive had some negative feedback on this so i plan on making the links darker.
again, thank you! much love.
-jenni
- dippy0
jenni and lara:
library is on Ave A btw 1st and Houston. I've never been to an NT gathering before either, so you won't be the only ones. Come on out!