flyer crit
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- pascii0
i like it. just give the disclabel a little light border and use versal type for the copyright
- sajets0
I don't like tha type in Lethal Rythym, but i guess its not done by you and is logo or something? But otherwise looks good to me. But its so early here that i can't be too bothered to go deep into it.
- sajets0
one more thing - the logo on vinyl on the top side of flyer doesn't look real to me. Perspective is bit fucked up IMO. rotate it more maybe.
- toe_knee0
thanks guys, will try those now. Yeah i agree with everything said. good to have other eyes on it. everyone else is out drinking 'cept me but a promise is a promise :)
- zaven0
I like the idea, but I'm not a fan of one side horizontal one side vertical flyer.. its bit weird in term of usability :)
- toe_knee0
yeah i thought that but the images i have dont allow for it. I'll see what i can do
- Dancer0
Like it!
But:
IMO the crisp white type on the black B/G too clean cut for the copy "Hard Edged Dirty..". Perhaps stress it a little? break it up treat it rough.
- toe_knee0
good tip thanks