critique if you have a sec
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- raelou
only a comp
- nick0
dont think the wood works. but if you're absolutely sold on it [or they are] -- then make it look more 'rich'.. we're talking lawyers here..
the rest looks fine.. fill that mofo out.
- chossy0
why not go the whole hog and have the pen and inkwell and all the kind of shit you might find on a fancy desk, it might look a bit cluttered though.
- stewart0
a law firm selling wooden floors. a combination i've never seen before.
personally i think backgrounds like these are caused by a lack of real inspiration, but yeah, law firms and inspiration.
so go with the wood, but not that prominent. maybe a 30% transparency does the trick.and totally centered layouts are horrible i.m.o.
okay okay, i give some constructive crit if it's filled a little more.
- instantok0
i would make the wood reference a desk more than a floor...also, i think you should push the stationary thing a little more...i.e. nix the rounded corners and make some elements look a more "printed" on the page...could work nicely
- stewart0
yeh, desk wood.
put everything they use on the desk.
and the website text on the papers at the desk. in perspective. that would be cool.mmmh, wood.
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- jevad0
show me some content dammit!
- raelou0
thanks for all the feedback.
it was a quick throw together, so thanks for not being to critical.
stewart / maybe God himself will shine down upon me with some mad inspiration so i put together incredible work like yours :)
thanks again.
- motokiss0
no dont do the fancy desk thing im doin that in one of my designs LOL haha
- stewart0
i wish i had some mad inspiration at the moment.
the design part was fun, but i now have to produce what i sketched earlier.
doh!
- motokiss0
haha ihear you stewy producing sucks god damn it but owell .
i fine i do better work when im drunk maybe i should just get loaded!!!!
- welded0
I've got to agree with the floor comments. Makes the paper look seem more like a rug look.