Logo Crit
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- JG_LB
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HIGH HOUSE PRODUCTIONS - A Hip Hop /Rap producer from Southern, CA needs a redesign of his old logo. I will also be doing his site. He wants "a contemporary look that can also be 'urbanized'." He's working on huge projects at the moment and wants something to reflect that. Big names in the hip hop industry are starting to seek his music... Suggestions? Comments?
- industry730
I like the text on the first one, but the HH on the last
- a-train0
I like the 3rd one... kinda looks like a high rise building... but needs a little work. try molding the H's... it looks to much like something from MS word or something.
Other than that it generaly looks good :)
- industry730
agreed, do some more work on the HH
- JG_LB0
what kind of molding did you have in mind?
- a-train0
Keep it "industrial" but make it flow. lol. thats as good as i can explain it.
ill get back to you... let me ponder on it.
- BZZZP0
i think moving the crossbars up on the 3rc version would make it look a little better.. also try to make a meaningful relationshit between the HH and the text below.
- contia10
In my opinion it seems a little too refined for a rap/hip hop producer.
A good synergy between urban and refinement will help.
- a-train0
maybe this. on the 3rd one, on the outer vertical bars near the bottom, have them flow out to the sides of the text and make the base of the flow somewhat thick. then allign the text so it is exactly the same width as the the outline for the two H's
- BZZZP0
will end up a lot like the hakuba logo that way
- BZZZP0
maybe add a fluid element, like slightly paintmarkerish curve to the bottom of the rightmost vertical line?
- a-train0
thats what im saying. it has to curve. kinda like the bottom of the Eiffel Tower
- a-train0
only not moving out but rather moving down and slightly in then out
- Dancer0
Make the H's into a ladder and be done with it
;)
- blackspade0
i liked the height of the taller, skinnyer H's, but i agree it does feel to refined, maybe add some kind of curves to contrast that ?
this might sound stupid, but check out some of the logo work of P Diddy's T-shirt site posted in NTB, might help
just a thought
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- JG_LB0
thanks yall... anything else?