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- level2
Just launched me new portfolio site: http://www.level2interactive.com… Please feed me back..
- save0
niiice rotation on the logo, totally unexpected !!
- janne0
yeah! what save said.
- clerk0
what janne said
- ethios0
I like that A LOT. What pixel font are you using there? Supertext / MS Sans Serif / B-Fuq ?
Great rotation on the logo, excellent concept, great exceution (for once)!
Good stuff
- welded0
Clean, straight to the point - I like. I'm not sold on the diagonal lines, though. It creates an awful lot of noise and seem to kind of vibrate, if you know what I mean. Also, in the clients portion of the menu I wouldn't mind seeing a more noticeable hierarchical difference between the client names and the bottom button, contact. I know the rollover colour is different, but maybe an em indentation would help.
Anyway, ya, overall I like it. Well done.
- dippy0
yeah, i agree with e'one else.
suggestion: can you make your client items more distinguishable from the rest of the menu? like change the color of the font or something? it could be confusing for some people.
- dippy0
yeah, welded has the same idea
- ethios0
Yeah, only snag is client items, like indent them a bit or add a little icon next to them to make them into a list or make them a lighter shade of grey, you get the point...
- ********0
what save said.. was also totally caught by surprise.. that shit doesnt happen every day, well done.
and what dude said about the diagonal lines.. when im lookin at your contact section its really really hard to focus on the content.
- warheros0
very impressive
- level20
thanks a lot guys. I've been looking at this too long - your comments are great! Im gonna work on making the clients section a little more set apart.
- Donvitoviti0
great except I really hate when people show their work so small.
The final box where you see the work should be twice the size and the work atleast twice as big.
A big mistake is letting your site become more important then your work. It is almost like.. look at my cool site.. oh and look at some work I did... when it should be the other way around.
Overall good site. The work thumbnails just need to be 2 times as big.
- save0
- save0
oops!
- Donvitoviti0
1 more comment. I agree with the clients suggestion.. but maybe call it something else?
Work?
Or maybe just move it up in the list. Putting it towrd the bottem made me think there wasnt a portfolio section for a sec. I would put it first or second.
Putting it third made it seem like it was going to be just a text list of clients you worked with.
- Bouncinsoul0
I agree with everything Donvitoviti said. Work sounds a lot better than clients. I woukd like to see some more color variation too. Like a 3 color scheme that ties into rollovers. A form on the contact page would be nice as well.
- Nairn0
the diagonal pixel lines feel slightly incongruous after that beautiful chunk of 3d - I'd've stuck with a solid mass somehow.
But hey, what the hell do i know? - that thing's bloody great and I'm deeply jealous of your talent.
you're quite clearly a bastard.
- Dancer0
you're quite clearly a bastard.
Nairn(Jan 23 05, 16:38)
LOL
Very slick indeed, I agree with Don in regard to the work/site relationship, I was more interested in navigating it than looking at your work.
Just balance it oot a little.
Congrats
- winter0
i like it.
I think you made a wise choice. i guess you're showing your work small because it doesn't relate immediatly to the web interface.
that's a real problem most of the time, but my op is that you've pulled out an interesting way of showing what you do. props.
- jevad0
good stuff - great work inside and a slick presentation