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- tripface
Problem: Identity needed for a friend of mine's cross-country bicycle endeavor coming this spring which will work with Brenner's Children Hospital, in an effort to raise money the hospital which helps children with cancer.
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- gruntt0
1, 4, 5 are quite nice.
- mevsthem0
i like the first one but not the white spike in the wheel...mabe take out the handlebars and just add arms
- abizzyman0
oooo...
I like version 4.
that image can go everywhere and just look great.
you could even get away w/just the face/biker on the front of a shirt etc.
Really like 4 - I see it looking great on just about everything I can think of... and it's cute and fits the event.
:) Good Job!
- mevsthem0
i also like the first one because of the big front wheel it gives that kids bike feel.
- johndiggity0
4. i don't even think you need the dots in the circles. maybe the rider could also be the hair somehow?
- gruntt0
when i said 5 i meant the bottom version of 5... the pole thing ain't working on the other one.
nice work trip.
- ganon0
4 is the best so far...1 is too formal, not 'fun' enough for a kid thing...i think the font is the thing making it look uptight....
- mevsthem0
id change the typeface for the 1st one.
- tripface0
word...
thanks for all your help!
- forcetwelve0
4 for sure - very "kiddie" looking and would appeal for charity bids i'm sure.
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good stuff.
- benedetto0
Somebody's been looking at PBS Kids... or should look at PBS Kids for a laugh. Still very nice on #4 though.
- bombsoda0
the 4th one
- janne0
no. 1 sucks ballz..
no. 2 is really nice!
no. 3 is a WINNER!!
- janne0
fuck the numbering is confusing..
i meant :
no. 1 sucks ballz..
no. 3 is very nice!
no. 4 is a WINNER!!
- janne0
really, everyone is wrong on no. 1.
it's too formal, the bicycle looks too childish (kids don't like that nowadays!) and rather boring.
#4 is a winner, especially if you use the vivid colors in the colateral..
- mevsthem0
#4 has been overdone.
- janne0
how is #4 overdone? gimme examples?
and i feel it couldn't be more fitting for this job..
- spendogg0
#4 is ace - good job