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- jarredbishop
please.....
http://jarredbishop.com/foolio/
navigation and layout only at this stage. and still a bit buggy but i think that because of the font...
thanks.
- warheros0
WEE that is hawt, i like the navigation behaviors.
the colors are nice as well. although if it were me, id get rid of the pink color and make what is pink now the greenblue you got going on, that is a nice color and goes well with the gray.
your continuity on your fonts...
- dippy0
please, you gotta do something about font you use on the nav menu (top left). Either use a pixel font, or skip the anti-aliasing.
But...
I love the font you use for the headers (top right). Is that a dinc font?
- jarredbishop0
thanks.. im still playing with color schemes.. i want something more than a one color+ greys scheme tho, to provide a bit more contrast..
im gonna move it from being centered too. dont like that at the moment...
the navigation i got from deluxeinc.com although it is heavily modified with masks etc at the moment...
- jarredbishop0
it is a pixel font but i think it doesnt render properly because of the positions the actionscript puts it in...
the top right header font is a freeby i got from http://www.brightbox.co.za .
ill have a play with some other pixel fonts and see what i can do.. i want something serify tho..
- mevsthem0
the nav font is blurry...
- canuck0
I don't really like the nav. dont like it shifting round like that. but thats just my 2cents. Otherwise it could be alright once some content is thrown in.
- jarredbishop0
revised: nav font smaller... bg image added and whole thing moved to the left...
- Beech0
I really like the nav - the shifting around works fine for me but I really don't like the font. If you can't use a pixel font due to the actionscript i would use a nice clear anti-a-d font. I do like the font for the titles in the right. I would look to add more colour but thats probably gonna come with the content.
keep it up :)
- Beech0
... or like that
:)
cool
- dippy0
layout crit: The nav menu and headers don't seem to go with the overall design. They're kinda floating above the content box, and since you use different fonts for them, they look even more haphazard.
Maybe put them in another, smaller box? Or map them out on a grid so at least there's more structure to them?
the pixel font is looking much better!
- mrdobolina0
jakob nielsen hates you!
I dig the nav though.
- beagle0
something is slowing down my mouse cursor on your website...
but it does look sweet though.