tsunami shirt crit
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- ortablaze
Designed a shirt to support the tsunami victims, profit will be donated. What you guys think?
http://ortagrafix.com/feedback/t…
is the hand recognizable?
- save0
thats a bit distasteful, its like having a graphic of a plane and the two towers on a tee for 911. Hey, how about putting people in the wave too.......???!?
- Meeklo0
I like the concept, hand-wave.
Im not sure about the typo or the gradients on the waves.I think its very nice of you doing this!
Good human!
- canuck0
I have to agree with save.
- warheros0
i agree with save, very distasteful. you need to come up with different imagery.
imagine if you were wiped out by a tsunami, would you approve of a shirt that was meant to be donated to you with a picture of what destroyed you on it?
something that makes victims feel good, like a flower or something. something representing life, not death.
try again.
- ortablaze0
i see ur point. just popped in my head and thought the design would be a good idea. Shoulda gave it more thought before pursuing it...I'll come up with something different. thanks
- save0
I can see your concept but I reckon some people may find it offensive. Why not keep the strapline, but remove the wave. Maybe have a really simple iconic hand symbol, and have it on a blue tee.....dunno!?!?!
- liquid0
agree with save.......
*fedexes new drawing board to ortablaze
- save0
"simple iconic hand symbol"
??????
- ********0
nice one save.
- rasp0
looks like an evil claw
- cubanhaze0
hey i did an illustration for a local design mag, and the concept is quite similar; except mine is purely symbolic nothin to do with lend a hand... its more like Gods hand
- QBDSN0
thats looks like the deadly eagle claw from the kung-fu tv show.
- mg330
To me it represents a folding hand, and that doesn't represent "handing" over money for anything.
- cubanhaze0
it might be my eagle-claw/dragon style reflects in my illustration
- superbaka0
i think a hand from the ocean is okay as long as its not in the form of a wave. more like rising from the ashes type of heroism..
- warheros0
the phoenix!
- dan100200z0
your intentions are good and all, but like save said, it's a bit distasteful...
On the graphic side the hand/wave need a tad more refineing, otherwise it would be good...
Also don't like colour of shirt of the font. But hey.
- blackspade0
Some say a comet will fall from the sky.
Followed by meteor showers and tidal waves.
Followed by faultlines that cannot sit still.
Followed by millions of dumbfounded dipshits.Fret for your figure and
Fret for your latte and
Fret for your lawsuit and
Fret for your hairpiece and
Fret for your prozac and
Fret for your pilot and
Fret for your cable and
Fret for your car.
It’s a
Bullshit three ring circus sideshow of
FreaksThe only way to fix it is to flush it all away.
Any fucking time. any fucking day.Learn to swim
- brianbrooks0
DOES THE TSUNAMI HAVE LARGE TALONS?
- brianbrooks0
WHAT?