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- warheros
okay this is my final site, which is due today (it's for a class, but also for myself), if i could get some constructive criticism that'd be sweet.
this will probably replace the other one i have up.
- paraselene0
i think it's really lovely. and fun. great work and a sweetly provocative way to show it.
- johndiggity0
i like this on a lot better than the previous. the only thing i might say is to rethink all your link actions so it's a little more legible. i'm not sure you need the key at the top either, or rather just dumb it down a little.
- armed_rob0
Fresh!
The only thing:
the top and the menu needs to have the same width as the pictures...I like that mess menu alot!
- k0na_an0k0
killer. nice menu. very cool.
- Dcsign0
lot better then your old site.... but do you still need 2 use popups?? And the angled lines links is illedgable...
nice photos
- chubba0
hmmmn... http://www.basedesign.com/ !?!?!
- Dancer0
Original and different, have not looked through all the content yet. But I like. Your roll over states are awful though.
Probably a B+/A
- canuck0
Sure i've seen this before. but maybe not?
Otherwise I say B.
i'm a dick.
- warheros0
wow, thanks for all the feedback, guys!
i like the rollovers! (it's just css)
couldnt figure out how to open flash and movie files in the iframe well, so i just made them pop ups.
shit! never seen that site. it's close but not the same.
- phatlee0
shit! never seen that site. it's close but not the same.
warheros
(Dec 9 04, 09:26)yeaah right...!
- warheros0
yeah?
seriously though
- Dancer0
Sorry not the roll over, the click (red B/G, Strike, AND underline) I just thdon't think it complemente your general look. V gare-ish (?sp)
- warheros0
hmm, i see what youre saying. although that link clears the iframe, in essence, takes you back to home. plus i thought it gave it a head, which it had been lacking.
- blaw0
nicely done.
i dig this, too:
- ricstultz0
nicely done man... I dig the organized messyness.
- warheros0
thanks for the kind words!
- winter0
very nice stuff imo.
the initial idea is there but refined and way more practical and beautiful. props.
- stewart0
Broose!
Broose!
Broose!
- warheros0
broose is due next week, so hopefully he'll be up by then.