illustration crit
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- Mark|Instil
just thought id share some of my illustrated people with you all get you opinion of them :D
- jevad0
toight work!
- brandelec0
toight like a toiger!
- ricstultz0
right toight.
- cyberthug0
I like the more detailed ones on the left. the middle girl is great too, but I think you might be getting too detailed on the hair ends, it ends up looking unnatural. These are tiny critiques, tho, overall you've got strong illustrator skills.
- tymeframe0
i dig both styles
- gruntt0
me likem'
- Spix0
awesome....liek the girl in the center the best, but it is all great.
- brooke0
Is this vector?
I like the clothing & the poses of the first three on the left.
And I like everything about the female looking downwards.
- DutchBoy0
the two on the left look like they got the most attention of their creator.
- Mark|Instil0
cheers everyone, not really showed any of my work off really so its good to get good feeback like that, to broke yeah there all vector illustrations.
- grayhood0
the two on the left are my favorite. for the two on the right i would say choose either all of nothing on the gradients, i don't think that little bit of white on the skin is helping you at all.
the one in the middle is sweet, the cloths and the hand look really good, the hair gets alittle crazy, and the black shadow in the hair might want to be a different shade then the neck.
something seems off about all of the teeth as well. not sure what.
but all in all great stuff.
- ricstultz0
Mark|Instil, you should check out Brookes work:
- Mark|Instil0
ahh yeah iv seen that site a bit back, didnt realise it was brokes tho, very good work in there :) just had another look :P
- brooke0
Better yet -
Check out http://www.illustratorworld.com if you're really interested in a constructive critique.
PS. Ricstultz is one hot gem in the wonderful wide world of illustration as well.
- timg0
in college a very wise illustration prof advised me to NEVER draw lines to indicate the spaces between teeth.
suggest teeth with just 2 or 3 spaces using some subtle tones, or better yet leave a flat white rack.