site crit on this fine december day
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- ross
http://www.clarityconnects.com
you know, the kind of site you build for your gal's aunt pro-bono.
thoughts?
thanks
- brandelec0
nice.
i'd knock off a bit of the drop shadow.. also the background pics for each section look real nice, they shouldn't be faded out like that when first viewed, let it come up as it is then drop that transparent white on top for the content
nice job
- warheros0
nice work for pro bono.
id change the font, looks goofy.
- blaw0
i'm not digging the tahoma either. maybe just an initial cap, too.
did you think about lining the section title text with the left edge of the logo tab vs. the edge of the "C"?
lastly, the dark blue rollover for each link "stuck" a few times.
- Blofeldt0
I don't like the lemon background. And i agree about bring ing in the images full opacity and then fading them down
- johndiggity0
i' not liking it, sorry.
for it being about clarity: the type is raw and there is too much of it, the images are clouded by the transparencies, and i'm still not sure what the company does. the yellow background isn't working well for me either.
but it's for a friend of a friend, so i'm not sure all the background on the project. as long as they're happy i guess.
- sherman0
i like it, i just find the yellow background a bit much on the eyes.
nice transitions though. :)
- drop_shadow0
her aunt should disown her and she should dump you
- Dancer0
Can't put my finger on it, but summit ain't right.
Oh and what Diggity said
- canuck0
maybe speed up the loading of the text. I didnt realize that each section had any at first when I was clicking around. Bit more line spacing too maybe (just a smidging).
otherwise not bad for pro bono.
rock on
- jevad0
speed it up - drop the type - amend the transitions - get better phtotos.
- Spix0
looks ok...cahnge that bg colour perhaps, and not so much dropshadow if any...dont like the round corners.
- Dancer0
IMO, the type is V boring
- johndiggity0
fix the wraps on the bullet list too. also, clickable links in the contact and clients section would be super.
- ross0
thanks for the thoughts...
ill repost update if i ever get a second to make the changes...
drop_shadow, ive been trying to convince her to dump me for years. thanks for your crit...
- liquid0
dump the girl .....kill the aunt
- jevad0
is that the kind of 'love the world and everyone in it' gospel they teach at your church ken? lovely!
: )
- _b_0
speed it up.
transitions/animation are waaaaaaaay too slow.
the text content appears to take a while to load in on my broadband connection, how bout something visual to tell me whats happening?