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- missjillBK
i started to redo my personal site and im not sure if im liking the direction or hating it...
any comments would be much appreciated (but not too mean) :)
- mr_snuggles0
more nude pics!!
j/k :)
Actually I liked the version you had up prior. There's not even enough here to comment on, sorry.
- ganon0
you havent noticed your portfolio links dont work?..background makes your resume hard to read...other than that, *yawn....
- sherman0
the web section doesnt work in firefox.
you lost me?
- grayhood0
haha ganon.
type is hard to read, not much here to look at. the back ground images don't seem to hold together any concept, other then girly. it doesn't seem like you putting your best foot forward on this one.
- missjillBK0
thats weird, i could have sworn they worked last night. ok, so you're just bored overall...?
- sherman0
not really bored, just not really taken in by it.
needs to be a little more engaging?
maybe go into your web work a bit more? details? screen shots? case study? anything except just a link to the work. try to keep people at your site.
- Donvitoviti0
ya.. it does seem a bit boring...
the scrolling is done pretty bad and just doesnt work.
The only thing that kept me glued to it was a nice cute girl in the corner.
- ok_not_ok0
yeeesss..i like the "watchulookinat" pose
- radar0
I agree with above statements about more details of work i.e. screenshots, etc.
Also I would ditch the dark backgrounds maybe simplify flower motifs to smaller design element - and a more defined color palette - also not much use for flash in this site - I would go straight HTML or just add flash elements.
- jevad0
It's dark...it's heavy...it's hard to read...teh images are superfluous..or seem to be...
I would suggest investing in a good grid...and finding a typeface that is more pleasing on the eye.
That would be a good start
- seed0
Tune up your AS movement . When you start and click work it moves a couple pixels for no reason. I thought the image of the girl was a link to a Pr0n site (I was hesitant to click it at work) and when I clicked it it spawned outlook express and I have to wait to launch an app which I don't even use. That is a big offense in my book. Especially as that image doesn't even give you an idea it is for contact purposes.
Other than that there is not much to it. The links don't work. Show us some screenshots or something. Don't just make us open URLs that we have no clue if we are interested in.
- ricstultz0
Maybe make it a long scrolling (horizontal) html page instead of flash. the flash feels a bit unneccessary, especially when we are bobarded by it sooo much with other sites. Flash really needs to have a specific site function these days for it to be catchy, not just for navigation. People don't have the patience for it.
Screenshots of your work would deffinitely benefit you.starting is always the hardest part :)
- missjillBK0
thanks for all the good suggestions. i knew i could count on NT members to make me start from scratch!!
(but i wont add naked pictures)
- sherman0
keep us posted.
- ricstultz0
best of luck ta ya.