critty crit
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- abizzyman
http://www.arcademedia.net/ditko…
I showed this a day or two ago... I killed a bunch of junk... and did major simplifications...
... i'm interested in your thoughts on the 'eye' mouseover and the navigation on the yellow square.
- swollenelbow0
bizzy bizzy, i like it, very minimal which is awesome...the eye is cool...only crit about the eye, is there a way to make it more fluid? you know...more natural?
and maybe add a bit more bounce to the movement...just a tiny bit more bounce...
- spiralstarez0
put that framerate to the magic 31. Little bit too choppy/chugging but otherwise a cool start.
- k0na_an0k0
can you make the eye wink at me?!? i'm lonely.
real nice though. love it's simplicity. it has just enough to make it all work. nice work. can't wait to see the final product.
- ewo0
when i breeze the mouse past the closed eye, it jumps open very unnaturally
- kbags0
Sweet!
- arinya0
I llike so far. Two suggestions. Just thoughts. To keep with the minimal look. How bout getting rid the colored blocks? Mak them tones the same color? But I think you have something about the color so you might not like that idea much so perhaps place the colors in the eye? Kinda reflecting like the eye on the Final Cut Pro packaging? Something like that? Don't know the colored blocks is kinda off.
Second. The sound the blocks make when they appear kills it for me. Need something smooth and again more minimal?
Just two suggestions. Other wise I like what your doing.
- buddylee0
looks like someone decided to wipe their ass and put the end result on a computer screen......flawless
- fresnobob0
what is the purpose of this?
- DutchBoy0
like it! lemme know when it is finished!
i am a sucker for minimalism!