db's onepager. suggestions?
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- DutchBoy
ok, so here is where i am now with my very first one-pager.
i need to fill the grey block with something. but cannot think of anything.
(preferrably no text, clients don't like reading..)
tia,
- DutchBoy0
oh, btw, it's in Dutch only for now. sorry.
- BonSeff0
these 1 pagers are looking clean and more and more like print
oh! the harrraah
lookin good janne. but it looks real crowded. might want to open up the hiriz spaces between projects
- DutchBoy0
cheers, 'seff.
but for now i leave it like that.
the point is, i need to drag in clients real bad. it has to look a bit more commercial, less design.. i know this sounds weird but you need to know the market here.. :/
and i am too tired now .. cannot be arsed to change it now.
thanks though!
- seed0
It's nice. The screenshots look good. I was going to say also my eye would like to see more padding between the projects. They are a little to close together. Also I don't really dig the hover link color. It's illegible on my monitor and the color doesn't really seem to go with it. Maybe something complimentary.
- BonSeff0
i meant vert spacing
all this sex talk got me thinking horizontally
:P
- DutchBoy0
k, just changed the hover color to black. thx.
- DutchBoy0
it even said hiriz bonseff!
lol
- breed0
looks good but im getting some really shitt text spacing issues over here. Im running firefox on win2k. (probably not a combo many of your clients will have)
here's a terrible screenshot:
- Jnr_Madison0
I have the same problem.
- Beech0
Yeah dude, i can dig it. Very corporate but sounds like thats kinda the angle your going for.
cool.
- DutchBoy0
cheers, thanks for letting me know!
i am on it as we speak!!
- Gorbie0
cool - very intriguing...
could be wider.
could be longer.
but you've heard that before, eh?
;^)
- GreedoLives0
i'm having some alignment issues too...
os9 ie5
i like the look of it tho...a lot
- johndiggity0
maybe fill the box with some sort of wooden element? maybe the vb logo is carved out. or a shot of some windmills or something dutchish?
- DutchBoy0
thx folks!
john.. no windmills please! so damn cliché, ugh. maybe a lady 'touching' her toes in a dodge ramvan, huh? *wink*wink
anyway, i just added quite a bit of hirizintal and vortikal spaacing..
please let me know how it looks now (i had to change the header img with the text as well)
vertical spacing doubled and horizontally i added 110 pixels.
the text should get more room now as well..
please, let me know your specs!
(esp. IE on os9 tends to fuck this layout up.. would also like to know fro Windoze..as most of my clients have windoze)
cheers!!
- blackspade0
looks great, admitedly havent read the thread
is that big grey box supposed to be there ?
- DutchBoy0
yeah, there needs to be something in it.
but i need suggestions.
are you on windoze ie, blackspade?
- blackspade0
WHUT! WINDOZE ?!
never...
OSX 10.3.5, Safari
- DutchBoy0
ah k.
i really need to know how it looks on windoze and os9.. as i am on os-x here meself..
anyone?
cheers.