Logo crit
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- elms0
to bentzen:
i started to play around with capital "A" and forms which could represent "A". The client wanted it to be quite abstract.thanks for all that crit
- mr_snuggles0
Can you make it larger and please center it?
j/k, it's nice!
- Blueman0
i don't konw.. the first impression of the logo itself was that it has something to do with skiing, a hill or a track in the snow..
my 2cents.
- Blueman0
i don't konw.. the first impression of the logo itself was that it has something to do with skiing, a hill or a track in the snow..
my 2cents.
- gruntt0
i'm not gonna beat around the bush and give you a bunch of soft handed shit. I'm gonna give it to you straight and assume that you can take it...
...i like it.
- Linda0
I kinda like it, and I like the orange one better. The only thing I have to comment is that the word doesn't really match with the shape above...the feel of it...it's to different.
- g3kk0k1d0
very cool :) i like it
- BonSeff0
is it the galleries 2nd coming?
- son0
for some reason serif's catch my eye now, maybe cause they look stronger?
anyway, thats what i've been using for everything especially perpetua...
you should try that.
- fate0
Have you tried making the symbol in a square instead of a circle? I'd kinda like to see that play between angular structure and the curvy "A" inside. But that's me.
I think the typeface could be a little stronger. Maybe heavier or wider.
- elms0
ok
thanks to you all
- whitenoise0
Not bad, but not that great either. Is that Isonorm you are using? try to find something better, something witha little more character... gridnik maybe if you still want that modern look, or how about a slab serif?
- elms0
hmm, good idea, that slab serif, have to try. yes, its isonorm.
- mastr0
sweet
- fifty500
i agree, change the font and maybe tweak the colour a bit to a stronger orange. would look good with a gray typeface
- bentzen0
i would agree, change the font. or adjust the end of the wordmark, the II seem seems to "tight".
what does the icon represent? looks like a sound wave. what was your process to get to this point? (just curious to know how others work out their design solutions.)
- thompson0
I went to a-gallerii once, they had a show about andy warhol. it was lame. If I am ever to go to a-gallerii again, I will make sure I am not being charged $20 to be in a-gallerii.
my pregunta primavera.
what is a-gallerii?
- jevad0
kinda makes me think of the aiwa logo
- Luckypp0
I like the organic nature of the symbol, but it seems unattached to the words. Also it seems to just be a neat shape for the sake of being a neat shape. Does the hill have anything to do with the gallery?