please choose a logo
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- pocho
can you have a quick look at a three samples? The art is going on a sweatshirt...the two color at right is on their letterhead and stuff.
- niceland0
the white outline around the head of the donkey doesn't seem right.
- monkeyshine0
I think I like the green outline but the edges are a bit jagged so I'm not sure. Maybe there's another step there to make it rock? Definitely don't like the box.
- pocho0
if I ditch the white outlline its hard to tell its a head...I take it out and keep putting it back.
Monkeyshine...should I tighten up that line...closer to the figure?
- Dublao70
Third one. Simple.
- monkeyshine0
well...that green line needs to be smoothed out alot more...and maybe a little more simplified. But Im not sure that will help.
Why not go with the third? It's simple and strong. I don't mind the white outline but have you tried removing the black on the right side of head? its a little distracting to me and probably not necessary.
- rasko40
yeah are they aware that 'burro' is a pretty well known label from London, they have a shop in tokyo aswell I think.
- pocho0
OK...I took out the white outllne. It still bugs me without it.
http://www.luredesign.com/burro/…
haha...this Burro sells screen printed art and is getting into apparel...work shirts, tees, stuff like that, for the Chicano market. The other Burro can keep the UK market : )
- Soler0
top right. no green
- benfal990
2nd
- DutchBoy0
i like it better without the white outline..
- agraphiclife0
second (upper right)..the green looks tacky
- pocho0
So opinion seems to be no outline...just burro and text. and NO outline on head...sure it doesn't look too much like a moose?
thanks Homies