another logo crit
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- zamiam
Hello guys!
I'm trying to come up with a logo for a freelance graphic bureau. We are three people at the moment, and i want to symbolize that we come together and form a creative environment.
I'm a dick at kerning and shit, so please be kind as i'm also a first year student.
anyways... here goes so far:
http://www.kran-grafisk.dkthank you!
- aliendn0
hey dont know if the edges will come out the way u want them when that logo is reduced
- dablammit0
I agree with aliendn. I mean it looks nice, but what are you saying with those rough edges?
- zamiam0
hmm.. I was trying to communicate that we are three creatives with "flexible edges" :-)
I see your point, but if it´s just ordinary circles, it looks too industrial..
Well... back to the think tank for me
Thank you!
- Baskerville0
not particularly creative given that you are designers, chopped up type doesn't do anything for me.
My main problem is with the ® symbol you've got in there. Given that you haven't finished the logo yet and you are a student I doubt it is a registered trademark. It doesn't make it look more 'professional' if you put ® next to your logo!
- zamiam0
hehe.. ok!
anything else?
It's not to be used for an actual company, it's for a project on school, where the assignment is to make a complete identity for a new creative house of our own choice.. Don't know.. I'm kinda stuck :-)
- gruntt0
the rough edges look "itchy"
all in all, good start but you've got a ways to go.
- agentfour0
for a 1st year student its pretty good i think. When i remember the crap i was doing back then, i think this is real nice....just needs some small changes mentioned above