another logo crit (if you dont' mind)
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- auricom
it's for a local hostel. the name is Richmond House of Bunk. still debating to incorporate that text. thinking of keeping this design as a more iconic style and have another one with the name.
thanks in advance.
- rasko40
looks like a record label.
I have no real problem with the 'mark', I'd probably make it fatter, but it looiks like a record label or something to me.
- rasko40
maybe I'd just fatten it up and seperate the letters a little and that is all I dunno...
- _salisae_0
looks neat but a little busy
wanting the rounded corners to be smoother - esp. within the b
- Hwa_Rang0
It doesn't really read r h b.
kind of looks like a funny m and a b. I also don't really think it says hostel on its own.
- blackspade0
id like too see it way smaller and in relation to some text to get a better idea
- _salisae_0
totally! didn't even consider that it wasn't mb.
for a hostel - kind of cool that it looks like roads - traveling vernacular.
like that.
is the blue area where you pee?
sorry.
- auricom0
yes, the blue area is obviously the toilet.
the hostel has a modern feel to it, it's going to be a very nice hostel. mostly IKEA stuff, but cool. they just have tons of money to waste on this building so they figured why not make it modern. they getting it from the insurance thank to the recent flood.
i actually did have a map in mind when designing it. so that's why is stuck to that concept.
- auricom0
i'm afraid if i put the words Richmond House of Bunk to this design, it could throw things off. thats why i'm doing a seperate text logo. doesn't hurt to have 2 that relate. that's what they asked for anyway.
- -kappa-0
Nice mark.
I'd have it solid as opposed to outlines.And fill in the the B.
Simplify. Simplify. Simplify.
And try distinguise the R a little better.
- Spix0
at first I did not like it, then, few seconds later I like it...looks like a map or something...streets..
- auricom0
some slight changes.
- motokiss0
i like it looks nice and clean. good work.
- auricom0
with text:
- motokiss0
lets see it in the blue and spread out the text abit
- kld0
nice, better with the text
- pablokorona0
in my opinion, i love the word bunk.
looking lots better.
- brains0
wait a second.. richmond house of bunk.. where is this based out of ? not richmond vancouver right ? bunk's canadian meaning isn't quite suitable for that...
anyways, I agree with the blue text, it will compliment the shelter logo thingy, and really make the title a little more subtle.. word.
- auricom0
i dig it, thanks.
- niceland0
smooth
- brains0
noice !