nt crit please
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- DutchBoy0
clean.
like the rotated skyline... looks like something else at first.
not much comments sorry.
- brandelec0
Dutchy, if you weren't a dude, i would kiss you..
oh what the hell..
- tny0
looks really nice
- tny0
should there be a period after "Lawncourts?"
- brandelec0
tny, you get a kiss too
- Dr_Jay0
lovely...
tweak the kerning on the "An invitation" type... it's so clean that kerning issues jump out at me.
also (this may or may not be needed) try tightening up the line/paragraph spacing so there's more white space above & below the type.
- nick0
i like.
but i dont want a kiss, i want the moose pic. HERE MOOSEY MOOSEY!!!!!11
- jevad0
really nice - super clean and linear
10/10
- mayo0
Looks great. Do you need to put the time in there?
- brandelec0
shwweet! thanks guys, i take these crits to heart
nick, 12.25, check your stocking
- brandelec0
Looks great. Do you need to put the time in there?
mayo
(oct 27 04, 15:25)that's exactly what i said!!
but nada on that yet, i'll muck a time up actually, merci
- Neuarmy0
very nice indeed.
- mayo0
pas de quoi
- Dancer0
NICE
One thing though as – this is for COPE should you not perhaps use one of their colours?
A unique and different approach though.
Good work
- Rand0
bee yoo ti full
only suggestion: tighten leading, so you get more space at the bottom than at the top, or at the top than at the bottom (enough so it doesn't look accidental)
- brandelec0
thanks again guys, going through suggestions now
bid ya'll a good evening
- 2cent0
send it to the printers!
nice job man.
- Point50
Nice! Send me one. I don't live in Vancouver, but I'll add it to my pack rat box
- blackspade0
very nice