poster crit.
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- derek30
and that text on the deadline thing doesnt make sense.. i didnt know what the fuck to write so i just randomly wrote that right before i saved for web
- brains0
Ahh, I'm a sucker for weathered wood. brings a nice feel to the poster. solid natural layout. clean. props. I'd like to see the finished product.
- johndiggity0
like the concept. maybe some more random college type shit in the background. the stickers look too wrinkled to be stuck on the wood btw.
- DutchBoy0
i was about to say, can you see the message.. as it seems cluttered at first.. but all the right info is there, and scaled in order of importance.. but still a good feel..
i hate to say this, damnit:
derek, i really dig this one.
:(
- brandelec0
looks dope to me.. may be some more random stuff, cover up more wood may be
some naked girls and i'll bow down ;)
- DutchBoy0
do not listen to johndiggity..
it is good as it is, you should be able to get the message when you pass it quickly.. so do not clutter it all too much na meen??
but then the playful style still makes it interesting for those who see it over and over again..
that is why i feel it is actually quite good..
:((
(i hate to give derek props.. damnit!!)
*sob
- DutchBoy0
no hard feelings tho, johndiggity.. ;)
- DutchBoy0
HA!!
i just found one thing..
looker longer at it i notice most elements are too perfectly aligned, which makes it look unnatural, and sort of fucking up the whole concept..
so the only thing you have to do is turn the things a bit more randomly.. let elements overlap a bit more to make it look more exciting..
other then that it's ace. :(
- jpolk0
the mess is too organized. the concept has been done too many times.
& tileeater is dressing as benecio del toro for halloween
- DutchBoy0
sorry for my spelling mess.. i am a bit drunk.
so therew..
- brandelec0
dutchie.. you too goofy dood
- johndiggity0
don't worry, i meant instead of that other random filler shit he has, maybe like part of a keg party flyer, or the nekkid women idea, or even a protest flyer to give it that college campus-esque feel.
- jpolk0
jinx dutch-o
- DutchBoy0
thank you.
- toe-knee0
too much drop shadow, the things look like they are hovering
- DutchBoy0
you people talk math to me now..
i am drunk, tired and should be asleep already..
think i better do so.
ta ta,
- kodap0
agree with the amount of drop-shadows.. I guess your school mates will love it.
- derek30
yea i feel you all...
good ideas there...
thanks for the crit.
i cant have naked chicks... its for highschool...
besides.. look at the sponsors.. they would flip!
- brandelec0
i cant have naked chicks... its for highschool...
besides.. look at the sponsors.. they would flip!
derek3
(oct 26 04, 19:14)...and your point is?
*waits for nekkidness
- johndiggity0
put a nekkid girlie straddling the apple logo. sooo naughty.