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- function82
Im working on a new site for my company and would like to get some input on what i've got so far.
brief explanation
background: small clothing company founded in 2000, based in Toronto.
purpose: new website, e-com, for this winter.
url:
http://www.bubblefloat.com/proto…prototype1 (pages 1-3) are different configuations of the same thing.
page1. this would be the main page, auto loads to tee's with news on the right.
page2. this is the clothing layout for the page2 style
page3. this would be the main page, doenst goto clothing automaticly, news on the left
prototype2. another site idea i was toying with, not sure about it though, because its so simple
any constructive comments would be great
thanks
- Soler0
Looks nice... not much to crit yet.
the all blue [dark blue] page looks a bit unrelated to the rest... I know it should but seems extra different. Nice.
- function820
i forgot to specify, one of the main things im wondering is if page1 feels too cluttered vs page2/page3. i like having all the info on the same page, and i understand it, but as someone coming to the site, is it too much info all at once?
- Neuarmy0
yea, i kinda felt a little overwhelmed...maybe use your color a little more to differentiate the sections? i also think that not having a pic in there right now is throwing me off...nothing to relate the text too. hope that helps.
- ********0
does shit float?
- Neuarmy0
...sometimes.
- instantok0
i personally don't care for scrolling product lists...i'd rather see a few pages of thumbnails that link to larger images or a dropdown of some sort...given that preference it feels a bit cluttered to me
im not sure if i can offer more because i dont know if this is a schematic or a visual design?...it feels like a schematic
- function820
the intent is a very structured, simple layout, focusing on the products, which unfortunatly arn't pictured in my mockups, so that doesn't help much. i agree with the scrolling product areas, i dont think thumbnails would work as far as simplicity is concerend, but maybe a drop down, something needs to be changed a bit, i know that, i just cant put my finger on what it is