W.I.P. critique redux

• d_station

  any suggestions , pointers, opinions, ideas, bum steers, encouragement, guidance, recommendations ?

  http://www.carlovutera.com/

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• shwax0

  maybe drop the black border from the letter that fills at the beginning. Also try increasing the frame rate for the opening animation of that picture revealing.

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• toe-knee0

  your copy text is too hard to read, icrease the line spacing a bit and use a lighter color.

  Those fade ins and outs will kill a mac

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