W.I.P. critique redux
W.I.P. critique redux
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- d_station
any suggestions , pointers, opinions, ideas, bum steers, encouragement, guidance, recommendations ?
- shwax0
maybe drop the black border from the letter that fills at the beginning. Also try increasing the frame rate for the opening animation of that picture revealing.
- toe-knee0
your copy text is too hard to read, icrease the line spacing a bit and use a lighter color.
Those fade ins and outs will kill a mac