< jaybeedesign
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- jaybee
post comments here.
- toe-knee0
its nice. but do you only have one project? i couldnt find anymore. also, the thing with the links in it, the effect is nice but it got anoying after a while, i wanted it closed but it kept opening, it also sends users away from your site
- function820
nice motion... however...
the logo is a bit bland
i can only see 1 piece of work, the 'featured work' is this correct?
you should make the photo section resize automaticly if the photo is portrait or landscape, because it seperates the section and makes them feel unconnected.
you need to add a 'onReleaseOutside' function to your scroll bar on the about page, it seems to stick on when i let go, and its hard to click away.
little things - the logo, when clicked, covers parts of the photo thumbnail page when its open.
more little things - add an onFocus to your text fields so they empty when they're clicked, or at very least make them select the text automaticly when clicked.
i like that the sound controls control ALL sounds on the site, not just the music, but i would make a bigger hit area for the play button, its a bit hard to get at.
just out of curiosity, is the motion done with actionscript or frame by frame animation?
- jaybee0
that's the only project so far coz' i've just started!
does everyone start with 20 projetcs??
- toe-knee0
feature project kind of emplies that theres more
- function820
most of us don't start with 20 projects, however i think the majority have personal work to showcase on top of commercial. adding personal work to show diversity would be good at this point for you because only showcasing 1 project screams beginner, and even though you may be new, you want to give the impression that you have the skills to handle a clients needs.
- jaybee0
correct, so i'll post all the graphic design too:
-business cards;
-catolgues;
-menu's;
etc..
plus
-art director assistant to ANTEPRIMA;
-product shooting;
-campaign shooting;right?
- mcmagic0
meta name="description"
meta name="keywords"it would be a good idea to have these in your html code
- jaybee0
function 82:
frame by frame anim.
- jevad0
not down with your color palette at all
- jaybee0
'-(
- -leah-0
yah the colors and the font for your name aren't my cup of tea either.
:)
- blaw0
nice, smooth... i like it.
i agree with the 'show more work' comments. in addition to the graphic design stuff you listed, do you have any web concepts, etc. that didn't get used? if they're good, post them and label them accordingly.
- jaybee0
thanks blaw.