Photograph Pheedback
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- warheros
i compiled some photos ill be including in a portfolio i have to put together for undergraduate transfer at UofM [among other reasons], i would LOVE to get some feedback on the photos i have chosen.
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thank you!
- -kappa-0
A bit hit and miss, but some of the compositions are awesome.
Faves;
Beach Scene (water)
R-Valve
Feet B&WVery nice, indeed.
- warheros0
thanks!
*bump
- warheros0
what do i have to do to get some quality feedback?
come on i need it!
- 2cent0
yeah i really like some of those compositions... really nice. i found most of your b&w photos to be a bit flat... too much grey, i think you need to get some more contrast in there... a good b&w photo should have 100% white/100% black and all the greys in between those values.
i really like the b&w one of the wooden deck with the feet to the left... if there was a bit more contrast in that shot it would be a banger!
keep up the good work.
- warheros0
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- kld0
The first image is the strongest. some of the more abstract ones are good too. I agree that the B/W are too flat. mess with the levels.
all in all a nice start but as a whole they are leaving something to be desired.
maybe go for some groupings that are related and really work the post production to tighten them up.
- warheros0
i was thinking about grouping them, but i figured getting a broad array of the types of pictures i take would work better. im still deciding on this.
thanks for the feedback though, i greatly appreciate it.
- ********0
nice stuff.
my favs: #1, #6 (love this shot), and the b/w feet on the deck...
- iLotion0
This is really nice:
Would definately agree with 2cent on the black and white work. Are these digital or neg?
If neg, these B&W printed properly would be awesome,
This one (quite Cartier Bresson):
And This one:
Some of the colour ones could do with cropping, mainly this one of the bridesmaids (very telling):
Oh, and I like this one too:
Hope this helps + makes sense, am quite drunk so possibly not. Worked as an assistant for years, and just thought I'd give you an opinion.
- devaur0
Nice photos!!
I love this photo:
- ********0
Unlike the others I rather liked the softness of your B&W shots ... especially the feet (just awesome) and the stick in the snow (#7) ... I also liked the #1 and #3.
In color the #1 looks good, most of the abstract/architecture photos are well-composed but we have seen to much of these ... liked R-Value (#16) because of the texture. The #2 is good, but it would be even better if there was more depth of field (sharper image) and #4 is nice as well.
- ********0
#4 is more than nice, it's hilarious ... very good shot.
the focus should be made on the girl in the back though (third from the right).
- kezza_20
jesus more pictures of pylons and traffic lights against the sky...
Stick to people
- warheros0
haha, thanks kezza!
- warheros0
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- spongebob0
some of the pictures look rather flat.
- warheros0
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