some crits
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- umhello
well, fuck it might as well get this over with now, so I don't have to make changes after im "done".
Please keep in mind that my scanner broke right in the middle of compiling everything, so it is stuck in the hanging stage. Any feed back would be apprieciated.
http://www.angelfire.com/ca6/lyo…
thanks in advance,
- warheros0
very clean & crisp, i like.
think about how your navigation interacts with the viewer, and how the navigation for your work interacts with the viewer. there's some conflict there.
dont be afraid to add some color!
- mrming0
I saw that exact Mark Twain quote on someone else's site this very morning - spooky.
- mrming0
Found it - http://www.distantmirrors.com/
- stewardez0
iit's very 'polite'. You might wanna take a bit more risk...
But, i don't know what the content's like.
- josimarX0
didn't get to the woprk because those 4 pop-up ads pushed me too far. (one per click)
- Chimp0
Yeah I had really bad pop ups.
Maybe choose a more intersting font. Add colour, maybe in teh roll overs. Looks a bit templated
- umhello0
yeah i know, damn angelfire!!!!!!
I was thinking about color maybe the same color I used in my eye, eh ill think of something.
It does look rather templated, didn't realize it till now, thanks!
templates=boring
should i even bother doing it in flash?
- andre_andreev0
Sorry, I have to be a snob and say that I refuse to look at ANY site starting with angelfire......
Spend $20 and get a real domain. Then, I'll take you seriously.
- whenigrow0
this might sound harsh, but get some real hosting/domain if you want your site to be takin' seriously.