Logo Crit - 1st time
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- iDp
Ok dont bitch cause this is the first time I've asked for a logo crit.
Thoughts?
- seangetti0
hmmm...your going in the right direction near the bottom i think...keep building...
- MrDinky0
doesnt hit the spot for me..
- iDp0
If you have any suggestions please feel free to include them. I used to kind of like the top ones with the little guys...but now I'm thinking I like the bottom ones a little better....but youre right they still arent there.
- MrDinky0
the bottom ones dont seem to convey the message..
top ones need typography work..
i could suggest you to tweet the font . not just change but change the shape of it to meet your needs
- liquid0
I like the ones with the guy at the top...... not with the hair.... set 1a...
I like where you were going with that.....and I particularly like the color selection.
I would just work with the typography of set 1a... but I like the arrangement of words however it doesnt work well small.... that might be an alternate larger version...
stick with the guy and the colors and work on the typography and you have a winner.......
- DutchBoy0
the guy silhouettes are good.. dump the one with the mullet tho..
the abstract ones doesn't say anything.. make it more feel like something industrial..
- slice0
the guy ontop at right (forget the long hair) smooth out shorts, btwn the legs, looks like they have gigantic balls.
try using one figure same height somewhere btwn the SMT (SMÄT). Not a fan of the greens. if it has to be green go more olive, more army surplus.
the bottom two sets look like telecoms.
- warheros0
when your guys are big enough they look like they have a big sack. i dont know, that kinds of turns me off of that one. but the idea is good.
your type is better with the last ones, try to incorporate that with your image, possibly?
just keep refining!
- slice0
(SMzT)
- DutchBoy0
haha, didn't notice the sacks as of yet..lol!
- iDp0
haha with the sack. Good eye guys, I kinda dig the sack though
:O
I'm working on some variations that I think are much smoother. I'll post in 10.
- iDp0
new and improved with added hanging cock for DutchBoy!
- iDp0
any thoughts on the new set??
- zedvox0
still not feeling it.
the colors are doing it
combat sports and the guy shoudl evoke energy
the forest green is not doing itthe type is not working at all
keep it simple
i like the guy.let him do the talking....perhaps use a more agressive pose??.push it furthertrash the bottom ones.
and mmm dutchboy's hanging cok.....:)
- instantok0
sets 2a and 2a alt, the right hand versions are better if you replace the button thing with the dude...the type will still need a little tweeking, it seems a bit misaligned
- warheros0
are you going for the lucent technologies look? if so, congratulations on that.
your dude looks better. why not try and make it more cohesive; merge your type and the image your showing everyone.
also, ask yourself if the logo youre presenting is made and suited for the right audience. i think your lucent looking ones portray a more professional/logistics kind of atmosphere.