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- kerus
ive been wrestling with text treatments and i cant seem to come up with anything interesting that i like...
so i bailed out and just went plain.
any thoughts / suggestions?
- -leah-0
looks nice but i am not sure what the knife is all about? do you stab people? are you a hitman?
- Soler0
Looks nice.
why not use the period as the design element throughout to seperate all text instead of just the name. ie. delete colons and slashes.
And All caps on the info is a bit much.
Nice tho..
- kerus0
there really is no purpose to it to be honest. beats a rectangle with the bottom right corner nicked off tho in my book!
i work with metal bands mostly so weapons are bonus points haha
- kerus0
soler: i tried that but it looked sort of annoying having all those periods. agreed oin the caps.. let me try that stuff tho thanx
- Soler0
yeah, and looking again, Its almost weird that that Line 2 is not quite as long as line 1.
They need to either be really different or the same. word up.
- brandelec0
make the knife pointier, it looks dull, loose the gradient bg and add some blue splatter
- kbags0
I like it all, but the knife doesn't really do it for me. I just think it's a bit over the top. Why not just have a fist? Or maybe a fist with one of those 80's spike bracelets, if you do a lot of work with metal bands? Or a fist with a forearm that has a knife tattoo? You could throw a feather on it too and make it white trashy for extra bonus points.
Anyway, I really like it overall, just figured I'd offer some out of the box thinking. I'd hire ya.
- kerus0
but but but the gradient.. okay youre right..
i dont know about splatter, its not supposed to be stabbing or anything. the hand is holing the blade, not the handle.
whatever the F thats supposed to mean
i am my own worst client ever!
- kerus0
okay here i am a couple days later. this feels a little more like somethin. eh?
- -leah-0
looks nicer, but that knife still freaks me out!
- brandelec0
make the knife double edged
- kerus0
the channel in the knife though helps identify it. i had a double edged one and my friend said it looked like a dildo sooo i went with this one
- brandelec0
if a girl ever tries to ask you to experiment with a double edged dildo, point somewhere (what's that?) and run for your fking life, trust me, don't look back
- kerus0
thats cool. can i quote you and use it on the back of my cards?
thanks for the help