Site Crit Please
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- rasko40
probably perfect for the market, the only thing I'd say is that the rollovers seems a little LOUD.. I'd tone those down so they are more subtle and in keeping with the rest of the site.
- stewart0
yeah, i like it.
nice colors in the photographs, clear navigation, legible typography.
nothing wrong with it at all.
- stewart0
i also like the Emmanuel Baptist Church website you did.
you have the power to make websites that fits exactly to your clients.
- TResudek0
Nothing reall holding it together... Can't put my finger on the solution. Just seems like everything is ok but if you submitted this site as a project in college I think your professor would tell you to keep thinking and try to "tie everythign together". Also, check the typography. Noticed the V+A doesn't look right and most of the typog seems too big anyways. AND, once last thing I promise, the color that comes up when you mouse over the links should be even on both sides of the words.
Other than that... fine job.
TR
- jstiles0
like rasko said, the roll overs can be improved upon. instead of a shade of purple why not try a darker shade of the existing navigation bar color?
other than that, good work.
- -_MU_-0
I really like it.
As a writer, I wondered if it could use a little info on the 'Intro' page, you know, just a couple of words, we sell wool or to that effect. But it's hardly essential, just my opinion mind.
*looks again*
Damn thats sweet!
nice!
- bedenken0
Thanks for your comments. I appriciate the feedback.
- ozhanlion0
wtf????
- Bluejam0
There's a commercial in the UK for wood primer with the strapline/tagline "It does exactly what says on the tin."
For some reason, your site made me think of that commercial.
- ozhanlion0
it is typical. did you take the photographs ? I think the site's overall imagery is not that bad, and that keeps your work clean and ordered. and of course it seems you have sense what you are doin, but to comment for you benefit we must see your other works.
ignore me please :)
- _salisae_0
nice but floating. anchor it. either have a set width for the browser window or have the horz lines go across or something.
ignore me too.