design/layout crit pls
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- jevad
looks totally whacked out because of the top and left margins but you'll get the idea hopefully.
I did a usability report for these guys sometime back and am presenting some ideas to them next week - would appreciate feedback on this....
thanks!
- versa0
go to sleep
- jevad0
cheers b - fucking useful crit that!
- ozhanlion0
hehe well he has right, what time is there jevad ? denver? 3 am?
clean design btw,
- versa0
i will in the morning........i am crosseyed........but i do like for the most part
maybe correlate the pics on teh bottom with the various subsections.......as are , they are just random eyecandy.......they could be indicative of the sections themselves
need sleep
(r)
- jevad0
word - cheers!
- stewart0
well, does look very decent.
logo can be placed a bit bigger.
but you have to de-angle the buildingpictures for sure.
- jevad0
what do you mean deangle the photos stewart?
- Soler0
The photo of the house/s is not straight.
Very clean, man. Looks upscale. I'm sure if you keep it up it'll work great. Nice work- and nice client too.
- jevad0
thanks sloer...really though I can't see the house at an angle!
- tny0
i think it's jsut the perspective of the shot...
clean, looks good
- Soler0
Really? It is a little weird, could be the camera distorting a little bit.
the right side of the photo looks straight, but if you drew a guide on the left side.... see how the roof is pointing a little rightish? Like its on a hill or something.
- jevad0
yes...yes I see now...I think it's jsut the perspective?
- Soler0
Looking at it even more [btw, I'm really nit picking here to try and help, but I really like it]
It also is pretty dark in that left corner too. Maybe try enlarging the photo somewhat to crop that out and decrease the amount of skewedness in teh photo. That would brighten up the page a bit with a really clean photo to match the rest of the site.
:-]
- rasko40
their logo needs work, looks like the type was modified with a felt pen and no ruler.
well, it looks like another one of those 'clean' css sites, same as any other, not very interesting at all, dull bland colour scheme, nothing aspirational, probably just what they want!
I would try to take some inspiration from some consumer style magazines, Elle decor shit like that, maybe even vogue, get some headlines and some dynamism in there.
shity, did I just say 'dynamism' haha
- tymeframe0
wtf?
it's nice, clean and inviting if you ask me.
the only thing that stands out to me are the related links, they're kinda screaming.
jevad, you have way more talent than you should :)
- stewart0
here, this one is de-angled with a technical camera
- Soler0
stew, is that shot from your penthouse loft?
- jevad0
lol.
"their logo needs work, looks like the type was modified with a felt pen and no ruler."
gawd tell me about it..their logo is teh horrible.
I know it's a bit 'bland' - but thats the look they are going for - if I jazzed it up any they would hate it - they're uber-conservative....
- jevad0
lol.
"their logo needs work, looks like the type was modified with a felt pen and no ruler."
gawd tell me about it..their logo is teh horrible.
I know it's a bit 'bland' - but thats the look they are going for - if I jazzed it up any they would hate it - they're uber-conservative....
- ********0
really clean look jevad. i like the variations in the greens.
i think the top white area is a little too sparse and can be used more effectively...it is important real estate. maybe its the size and spacing of the logo which relates to the tag line strangely, or could be just me.
i really like how "the wonder of denver" font contrasts with the rest. nice and upscale.
you get a break on those houses??