flyer crit
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- quest76
gotta do this flyer for some trendy club here in LA. I'm having some designers block and wondering if you guys can tell me what you think? I got no one here to give me some crit.
- rasko40
lose the naff filters and make it look gritty mixed with technicolor, get on the photocopier.
- warheros0
there's too much conflict between the different fonts your using.
rasko is right, rough the image up more, but more dirty than just adding a filter...dirrrty. photocopier is yo' friend.
maybe make the title of the club and make it really big or something, so first you see the name, THEN the image youre trying to stick on the club.
yeah!
good work so far.
- tymeframe0
i don't understand what the flyer is about, is the restaurant only open one night?
- ********0
the font issue is glaring.
not a big fan of the fuscia, but that's a personal thing.
- kodap0
:/
- instantok0
is nipple allowed on flyers?
- phatlee0
wank
- quest760
thanks for the comments..
there is only one filter on here, that's HALFTONE PATTERN but i faded that out a bit.. other then that no filters.. as far as the fonts, i'm only using one which is for the date.. i really can't do anything about the logo that's how they want it to look..
this is for a special event at the club.. let me finish up the back and i'll re-post that way you get both sides..
- ********0
what font are you using for "restaurant, nightclub"?
- Tara0
def. change the font you are using for the date and if you're going to use the black behind the white type it needs to look more faded or not so obvious
you're close, i like the image.
keep working, you'll get it!
- yourmother0
One tip for all you 'North Americans' - lose the fucking obsession with grunge. No dirty images, no dirty type, keep it clean and simple.
Oh, and if you're doing web work, no pixel fonts or pixel wallpaper backgrounds.
That's all. Carry on.
- warheros0
word to your mother.
- story0
quest76, where are you getting these printed?... if you need help give me an email, I do printing.
- armed_rob0
I like your work!!!
My only comment is try the logotype in white... I think that the yellow is mixin' too much with the image....
Good work!