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- lenusiya
my friend and I just started a company called adapt and we've been working on the intro for our site...the only button that is working is the home button...the effects...let me know what you guys think about the into...it's still work in progress but it will be good to get some feed back before we are done...thanks in advance...
lena
- ganon0
intro is too slow, and to be honest, not very impressive...therefore, i see it as pointless...i think you need to surf around the net and draw on some inspiration...flash intros in general are very 1997....
- jox0
Um, yeah. I'm trying to see the purpose. Or a punchline.. Or *some* point having it?
- zedvox0
remove the horrid music.
and the for a second when the red shap comes about it almost looks like a swastika....just for a second....
i personalyl like the middle part of the animation all the stripes ...
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- lovaboy0
Ditto what these guys said. But keep trying...it takes experience to do it right.
- brandelec0
it's not there yet, but you guys are on a pretty good start, purpose over presentation
- TResudek0
The button action seems to work sloppily. If I mouse over the button and pull, out really quickly it skips to the "out" animation instead of reversing frames.
- kerus0
i dont really understand the intro. it seems like you guys gave a great idea, but no substance behind it?
- jpolk0
yuck.
the logo's really bad too...
- oliveira0
jacob nielsen would hate this.
- fatoe0
tuff room ;)
i agree.
intro...why?
- lenusiya0
so you guys think we should just forget about the intro..
- brandelec0
honestly i say drop it and focus on the site's main page
- ganon0
kill it and concentrate on your site design....
- Soler0
hate to bash but intro is WAY too long- the lines are Ok in teh middle.
Adapt is such a cool name [taken?] it seems that that should be the concept behind your logo / site / animation. Things growing, adapting, moving, etc.
I no, I've said too much, I haven't said enough.
- brooke0
I would try & come up with a stronger logo first.
- lenusiya0
thanks Soler..that's good advice
- Donvitoviti0
Loose the intro.. work on the designin general on the home page.....choose a better font.. and LOOSE THE HORRIBLE MUSIC
- lenusiya0
can't change the logo...adapt has to stay because we are getting our business cards tomorrow...already printed...
but if you guys don't like the LT part of it...that can go..what is the verdict...the adapt has to stay
- Soler0
so hard to say if you have to keep the logo.... maybe it is somehow locked up in another shape that relates to new site graphics? Adaptation is a movie about adapting. maybe it will inspire you.
- shant0
What band made that song?
Gay McGayer?