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- shellie
would you mind giving me a little input on a site im working on.
they gave me all assets friday.. comps due tomorrow... so its not like i have a ton of time. i think they wanted something hot but... theyre not expecting the world considering theyre giving me no time to concept. havent even heard the guys music yet.
take a gander. whattaya think:
http://lloydbanks.hellomimo.com
- warheros0
the first two would be all right i think without any graphic there on the bottom right, or find something other than cash and a gun.
im liking the fourth one so far the best. it looks like it is the most refined of all of them. the money theme thing is kind of cool. maybe do you have a picture that is more vertically symmetrical than that pic? it would fit better with your layout.
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- SLAZ0
i personally like the idea of the first 2, the smoke needs some work though... also, the image of the money looks too crisp compared to the potrait, whereas the gun looks digital created and the potrait almost has a painted feeling to it...
i like the 4th one also, how it is seperated more than 3rd...
overall, i think the "black blackground" theme works better for this, just my .02ยข
- Nematoth0
I like the gun version.. black bacground..
Its the smoke that does ot for me..
Looks well cool... :-)
- jevad0
I hate all that bling shit....the 2nd comp idea looks way fresher...imho
- Nematoth0
but on second thoughts, with that layout, there's not a lot of room for content.. unless its gonna look different on the following pages..
The fourth is the best, layout-wise..
how about putting a smaller version of the gun, mirrored on the bottom right hand side?
(its just the smoke thing that i really like.. )
- jevad0
I fucking hate guns
- shellie0
warheros,
the photoshoot didnt give me much to work with. i have one pic per section so i dont really have any kind of selection at all.they specifically asked for money and guns and "bling" cos he's in g-unit with 50cent and thats what theyre all about... guns and money. as a matter of fact, almost every picture in th ephotoshoot is of him in a suit with a run and a pile of money.
those things i kinda cant change.
- blackspade0
ya i prefer the 2nd compositions on the paper by far
- lind0
Comp 3 -- it has the most bang for the buck.
The text Lloyd Banks at the top doesn't seem that strong next to the dark decorative bar.
Comp 1 & 2 seems kinda cheesy but I can see marketing types going for those.
- warheros0
try seeing what it looks like [for all the layouts] with a different pictures, and maybe not so painty like, but real like. iunno.