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- SLAZ
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starting a new design venture.. what do you think of the logo?
- SLAZ0
- Soler0
don't really like the y and p being connected. especially since the "p" is accentuated in the "fp" version. is that font "eclat"
- ganon0
you definitely need to connect the f + r...since everything else is connected, its looks off balanced....
- Raind0g0
Maybe you should work a little harder on this. Looks like something one throws up before noon. Do that, then post again.
- save0
eewwww
- InnerPixel0
lol at save.
To be honest I'm not a huge fan of any.. Sorry, I know that's bad criticism... keep tinkering!
- muckychris0
I think you are in good shape. The nav (uper right hand area of page) isn't apparent that it is a nav. But rock on!
- e-wo0
umm....wrong thread?
- vwsung18t0
i like the blue one
- SLAZ0
now revised
- ********0
slaz what do you think of it now?
- save0
- stewart0
i like it. but drop the first f or make it a capital F
- stewart0
the R is cool.
what's the font?
- ganon0
really reminds me of http://www.superfamous.com/
- stewart0
hell yeah ganon
- SLAZ0
ahhhh, good call ganon... didnt even see that...
i am not digging the stars though, kinda retro, 80's...
i need to work on it more, like a smart man once said, "i dont love it, but i like it"... i need to love this...
- Soler0
the stars are OK outside the text, but in the "e" is no good at all. The "r" is better, but the left side of it is way too heavy in comparison... Also, it is capital and nothing else is? weird.
I like the two words not connecting....
hope that helps