logo crit
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- arseni0
upd: it's the first version.. havent thought about color yet.
- ********0
tis ok, but it took me like 30 seconds to figure out what it was... it's an initialized logo. creative, but it looks too abstract. post up some other ideas to compare with!
- rasp0
a bit nasty to be honest.
- DutchBoy0
hard to scale and reuse in diff. media, it is too vertical.
also try to use a bit more imagination in choosing an applying type.
- ********0
it has potential - one quick tip tho, try to keep the stroke width of the logo mark the same as the typeface, too many stroke weights = ouch!
keep-going!™
- andre_k0
the mark is too abstract. Its drawn badly, each line has different weight. Why are some corners oval and some square?
Try out some more solutions.
good luck
- arseni0
guys, thank you for the critique and tips :)
- zeroblade0
shoot me but i think it looks like a guy in a wheelchair.
maybe you could mod the USB logo instead. ~: )
- JohnR0
The top of the left ascender post is rounded at the top. It is not relating to the type at all. It seems foriegn being rounded.
In the horizontal logo on the top (the one that includes the word production), it doesn't seem like text is macthing up to any certain points on the mark to the right of it.

