card crit
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- jevad
still working on some new business card designs and would love some feedback on this one:
Does the 'nt' look better outside of the box?
- exador10
i think the box is kinda cool jevad...
i'd keep it...
not sure what everyone else thinks...but i vote keep the box.:)
cheers
exnice work by the way...i quite like it...
- jevad0
thank you kindly sir!
- ********0
First one's cool. Actually the NT outside the box looks like "floating" to me. Better inside the box.
- jevad0
yeah I guess it does kinda 'float' w/out the box...didn't notice that before...ta!
- umhello0
persoanlly, I like the back layout much better. I know its cheaper to have the front white (2-color). Try ths-I'd like to see it if possible-front: chage the black font to the same blue and keep the Nt in the box; back: loose the white box and make just the nt white letters.
- kbags0
Most excellent.
I like it within the box.
You know, I am in the same process right now; I'm finding that a lot of people seem to be desining card backs similarly nowadays with the solid color and all. I broke mine up with a pattern, but that really changes things dramatically...it's a big buy-in.
On the front, I really like the typeface and the vertical positioning, but might consider tightening the copy a bit...feels unduly cut off at the bottom.
Superfine!
- jevad0
comme ca?
- sexypixel0
I prefer it out of the box myself, much cleaner, but i would maybe line the top of your name with the top of the 'nt' and the bottom of your title with the bottom of the 'nt'
but i am a grid freak
nice work, very strong and trusting looking
- peteski0
no box no box!
you're going with the box, aren't you? - try moving the nt to the lower left - bleeding white. a thought.
- jevad0
I am very much liking umhello's suggestions:
- umhello0
most excellent! Just reverse the box color sceme: NT - blue
box - whitelol, oh my did i just repeat what i said in a jackass way, um oh well.
- umhello0
and you saved money!!!! its now only a front/back one color.
Very nice, gives your a card a strong presence and lends a bit of professionalism to it. Less is more as they say
- jevad0
yeah cheers!
- umhello0
oh yeah before i forget, I you can find a way, you might want to check into a blue cardstock that matches your color choice, been awhile since i had to design cards, but I think if you do it that way, its a shit load less ink for te printers to print. But like I said its been a while (years :D)
- jevad0
nice tip!
thanks all for your input!
- jevad0
bump for the brits...
- motokiss0
whats up jev i like it , try making the white box smaller on the back and having the n and the t kinda half in the white and half running into the blue, its worth a try:P
- ********0
i like the box but I think without the box it looks cleaner - I'm a big fan of space. - nice stuff jevad!
- carver0
nico macbrain, these are pritty poor mate. i realise it must be tricky designing things to promote yourself, but these look like a lawyer's business card designed by a lawyer that hasn't got a lawyer. awwwww, sue my ass!!! back to the drawing board son!
- jevad0
lol