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- chocodog
I'm in the middle of a "discussion" with a marketing sales person about design. damn.
does anyone see anything wrong with this ... or any sugestions on improving it? it's an email. links aren't added yet.
http://marketing.arvutid.biz/ord…
(it's in Estonian, btw). thanks.
- MR_T0
What does it say?
It's pretty rudimentary.
- phatlee0
speechless....
- phatlee0
I love the alligning of text.... :P
- chocodog0
sorry ... i guess a translation may help.
"Answer a questionaire and win an Ordi laptop"
"laptop specs"
"Click here"... and rudimentry, maybe but it is an email, remember.
- rasko40
you could make that a lot smaller and yet more impactful with a bit of thought, the colours are a bit dull too but I guess thats corp ID.
- r_gaberz0
stronger colors
- chocodog0
well, as rasko4 said, that's their corporate colors.
besides the colors ... anything else?
- MR_T0
There needs to be concept and idea here...or else it's just desk-top publishing. All decent pieces of DM do this, whether your trying to generate a sales lead or a click through for a competition.
- zeroblade0
move the lcd out from under the text. drop shadow a bit. warp the text a little.
use serifs for all the interactables.
just rantin'.
- chocodog0
alright ... thanks for the input. Our marketing sales person is giving me a clearer picture of what he "thinks" he wants anyway.
it'll problably end up completely different :)
- bomy_dick0
sad colors ..
change that first
give it some punch, some depth too