Feedback on animation
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- josimar0
11mb, I'm waiting for it to load...
- nessdog0
ditto ;)
- josimar0
very nice!
like the little camera pan at the end and the colours and textures are cool. And, it's original, well done.
- toastie0
very nice! nice grass effects and good scene compositing. My only complaint from a 3d technical point of view, would be the animation of the characters. Since they are the center of the scene and attract all the attention, you might wanna polish it up a bit more. Maybe get some mo cap files. I really like the dog's movement though.
- nessdog0
Oh jeez, I'm at my moms house on 56k connection. My boredom.
Yup it's tres cool, but I don't really like your use of type. That could definitely do with some more thought. :)
good work kiddo.
- atomica0
it was a side scroller..... hmph. I agree that the characters need to be refined more. Soundtracks a nice choice.
- vwsung18t0
i think you can be more creative with the text. i don't mind the look of the characters, i think if the moevments were more realistic it would be a masterpiece. I like the soundtrack too.
- phatlee0
nice........love the movement of the grass, just like the film, 'the thin red line'......
agree with previous comments!!
- theplanet0
Thanks for all the input. I agree the human movement could be smoother. I struggled with that for weeks and I finally decided to go the other way and make it look fake but lyrical, I will go back and tighten that up.
Does anyone have any suggestion for a font? When I used more classical fonts they didnt seem to match the organic feel of the animation. But I agree this one isnt perfect.
Thanks again for all the input.