id critique please
id critique please
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- ilrapa
What do u think about this?
- nicko0
http://www.ilrapa.mfactory.co.uk…
Typography looks OK. Not sure I'm in love with the symbol.
Use a dummy address etc on your visuals, always looks more realistic.
- rasko40
I'd post a jpeg if I were you, not many can be fucked with a pdf.
- nicko0
It's wierd, I see the white outline of a C. Why not make the symbol smaller and position it at the end of 'holding' (above the x height).
Also, consider a lowe case g for Ghezzi.
- zzzorzzz0
I think symbol is fine and typo is outdated. and the logo on the bottom of the envelope ain't allowed in most countries (post restrictions).
- ilrapa0
thank u for your councils.
Grazie!