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- qaddisin
wonder if it is two confusing to figure out where the html content is. its all a demo so nothing works completely.
the url:
4everbasic.arcanegraphics.com
- Bluejam0
You need to make the navigation on the homepage stand out more, missed it completely. The flash site looks too clean and metallic, clashes with the logo. I'd expect to see something a little rough, check out http://www.mfdoomsite.com
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- qaddisin0
ok so its hard to tell the html content. logo too rigid for the clean interface of the flash site.
thanks.anybody else?
- radar0
I like the look of the HTML front page - more so than the inner-flash page with the 45's.
- TResudek0
I totally agree. The front page is the way to go.
Start by eliminating teh word "Navigation" and making that navigation more obvious. If you have to say "navigation" then the design isn't working.
Then correct misspellings (see "butoons").
The metallic 45s are p-l-a-y-e-d.
TR
- qaddisin0
ha ha ha
i didnt try for metallic 45's didnt even think about it. you guys are older than me i guess. i like the bkgs so i will prob. keep that and the mis-spellings will change once content is added. my mistake.my thinking is to either get rid of the html content or make it more visible.
thanks people.
- tymeframe0
what is up with that dancing girl?
http://www.fusionentertain.com/
(open their audio player)
warning: that sight may hurt your eyes.
- ldww0
i, too, almost missed the enter button. i did not see it till i was about to close the window.
- qaddisin0
well that settles it i am doing away with the html content. leaving the splash and keeping the 45's ha ha. your guys are funny.
thanks people.
take care
- peteski0
dont really get your question but, my first reaction was: if there was no gray and no striped verticals, just that blue all around, it would be much cleaner - nicer to look at.