Site Cri*tique"
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- tymeframe
i wonder if there's a point to this...
http://www.visualfusiongraphics.…
still in progress...FROM LAST SEPTEMBER! One day i'll hide from the rest of the world to finish this.
- elwolverton0
emmmmm, the nav buttons are a little sluggish, and the font types should be something different--smoother.
- bug0
I hope i don't come off sounding too harsh, but i think you should scrap it and start fresh. I think maybe you've been trying to make this work for too long now. It seems outdated to me...Again no offense meant, just trying to be helpful.
- save0
i think you should hide and never return...
- reaper0
It looks alot like this site:
http://www.williammetrailer.com/…
- elwolverton0
...which isnt necessarily good
- save0
...either way, there both wank!
- tymeframe0
ok, well thanks for the useful comments.
Of course reaper's site has much more modern aesthetics than mine.
As for save, try saving your grammar before taking on any further challenges. Shouldn't "there" be they're?
- bug0
"Of course reaper's site has much more modern aesthetics than mine."
I hope that's sarcasm...
- JamesEngage0
Just because you can use flash doesn't mean you should.
- sajets0
If you want to keep the layout, then there is few suggestions i might give you. They are subjective, so don't take them personally.
Now you have a site that changes after every button click.. no need for that. Just make all the sections of your site after one that you like the most. You use too many fonts and they all are not good. They are too big and they don't go with your design.
Some movement ibn your site is good, but when a section is loaded you kill everything with bad design. I'd scrap it and start fresh and work on one section, and then - if ready - i'd use it for other sections, not like now when you have about 6 different styles and more than 8 fonts...
Think about that, and don't take things thats written here so personally, you only get more for that. Cuz you came here to ask for a critique and you have to take it - be it constructive or destructive. Cuz even the latter has points in it
- save0
either way....its still shit!!!
- rasp0
bin it, buy a design book.
- paulrand0
that has to hurt.
- rasp0
- Jnr_Madison0
mmmmm
- crap0
I hate to say this
but I think it looks bad.
get inspired, flip through designbooks, surf the net
and try to come up with somerthing simple and stylish